Showing posts with label RTC 9. Show all posts
Showing posts with label RTC 9. Show all posts

Monday, 25 August 2014

Spelling.

My boys have very little confidence when it comes to spelling.  They are actually really embarrassed about their abilities with spelling words correctly.  It is so bad that they will chose easier words in their writing because they are know how to spell it, rather than try a word they might get wrong.  Over the last few weeks I have stressed to them, that spelling is not something they need to worry about.  I just want them to try and then we can correct things together.

These boys love to use wonderful language and when I sent them out around the school on a "treasure hunt" the other day they came back with some excellent descriptive phrases and words to describe areas of our school on a cold and foggy morning.

When they got back to class, they highlighted the words they think they spelled wrong.  Then I typed up the list and we read through it together.  We noticed that we could tell what all the words were suppose to be, they had been sounded out really well.  They were just missing the knowledge of some of the spelling rules, so that is our next little goal.

The list:
Sliprey/Slipry
Concret/Concreat
Hops (basket ball)
Derw
Wavey
Unstraight parking
Intelgent
Drity
Slimmy
Senice fare
Red and witie
Suppoing
Mokoai
Murel
Artafichil
Steers
Shriveld / serveled/sreviled
Prikley
Sogey
stabel

Sunday, 3 August 2014

Story writing

Boys were given pictures to choose from and a story planning sheet.  They could choose whether they worked by themselves or with a partner and they could choose to either type or hand-write their stories.

Poihipi and Douglas chose a picture of a rugby tackle and decided to write a story about the Rugby World Cup.  They planned and wrote their story together on a Google Doc.




Sunday, 29 June 2014

I am definitely learning!!!!

I have made new discoveries this week, about boys and writing.

Boys don't listen.  They like to see and do.  I should have known this before, from my own experience with my husband and 2 boys :)

Keep things short, sharp and simple (achievable).



Tuesday, 17 June 2014

Light Bulb Moments....

The last week has been a huge week for me and my inquiry.  It started by observing my boys early last week and seeing that they were quickly moving off task and just generally bored.  I had started looking at paragraph structure with them and it was too much sitting around with very little purpose to them.

Things I have learnt:
Boys need to see a bigger picture - there needs to be purpose (for them, not just me).
Boys need to move around, don't just stick them at a desk and expect them to engage.
Boys have brilliant imaginations, and love to have fun!
Boys learn by doing and experiencing.
Boys need to experience different learning environments.

From these realisations I have....
Moved them away from having lessons completely in one space.
Started exploring the environment around us.
Created new learning spaces in my classroom for my students to work, e.g beanbags, couch, mat etc.
Tried to put my self in the boys shoes, what would make me excited about writing?  How can I get them to use their imaginations?
Asking the boys "What do you want to write about next?"  "Why?"
Opening up the discussion - Wow, the language that comes out when they can 'just talk'. Exciting! They don't even realise they are talking in similes, metaphors etc.
Finding other ways to express their written language.  Presentations, recording their voice, video etc.

I am so excited, i just need the ideas now!

The other day, it was so windy.  So we went outside, in the wind.  We sat by the buildings and listened to the wind howl around the corners,



We went to the middle of the field and felt the wind, played in the wind.  We talked, we shared and then we wrote all our ideas down.  They boys wanted to sit outside in the cold wind to write, they loved it.  "Can we stay out a bit longer?" They asked, "I want to be able to write down all my ideas!" Love it! Yay!




Once the boys had written down their own ideas, they shared their notes with each other and then wrote a description of their time in the wind.  Check out the video of their writing.



Monday, 26 May 2014

Popcorn Balls and Procedural Writing



Our next task with popcorn is to write the procedure for making Popcorn Balls.  We started today by making the recipe in the cooking room.  We gave instructions to the students but they never got to see a written version of the recipe, as their task is to write their own.

The students were excellent listeners (even though they got a little high on sugar after all the secret taste testing...) and followed the instructions really well.  They also worked co-operatively in their groups.

When they got back to class they had to jot down in their writing books, all the things they could remember about the ingredients and the process.  Tomorrow we will write up this information as a recipe for them to take home.




Sunday, 25 May 2014

First Week - Popcorn!

WALT to write an advertisement for popcorn that will convince Mums to buy it at the supermarket for their kids.

This week we focused on the language and format of advertising.  What should a good advertisement include?  How should we set it out?  What is our purpose?  Who is our target audience?

Students looked at models of great persuasive advertisements.  They then drafted their own before creating a good copy on their computer.

The draft writing process:











Here are some of the final outcomes:


Something I realised from reading the above advertisement is that I need to teach my students about copying facts straight off the internet.  And also I need to talk to them about using relevant facts.  Do Mums really want to know this about popcorn?  Will these facts help persuade Mums to buy this product?